essay practice

Significantly,Quickly,Firstly,Remarkably,Readily,Similarly,Surprisingly,Important,Curiously.




Firstly,look who is here today



In,against,Before,Between,Over,Behind,Within,Under,Below,At,For,Throughout,Near,About.



Under the rock,there was a troll
Below the ground there were worms



P point- State the point you want to make
(Throughout the novel 'Abomination; Martha is bullied at school.)

E evidence- Provide evidence to support your evidence:2-3 sentences.
(An example of this is the incidence with the girls throwing water over and under the toilet stall onto Martha. When she came of they punched her in the stomach and called her a slut. That made her feel upset and angry)

E explain-  Explain what your point demonstrates: 2 sentences.
(Unsurprisingly, this is an example of physical bulling  by students towards Martha. There was an imbalance pf power between Martha and her bullies because there was one of her and three of them)


L Link- write a sentence linking to the next paragraph
(another way Martha experiences suffering is at the hands of her parents and the church of the Righteous.


committed,Undaunted,Determined,Forced,Gifted


Determined to win his next game because he lost the last one.


While our class was working,next door was loud.
committed to this challenge, I still lost
Quickly I ran to the door, but it was locked 
near the door,stood a mouse.

 t title of your novel (abomination) 
 a author of your novel (Robert swindle)
 k key argument / premise (The chapters of Martha and her changes are important to the story
 o outline of essay